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你看我翻译的对么，英文有什么问题，可以给我修改一下吗

金融是现代经济的核心，随着经济全球化和金融自由化的发展，金融市场的安全与稳定成为我们关注的焦点。金融活动的发生，必然会伴随着金融风险的产生与发展。而金融风险并不是孤立的，由于金融市场、金融机构之间高度的关联度和互动性，所以当金融风险产生之后，如果没有被及时的化解和处理，积累到一定的程度，就会发生扩散，使其逐步被放大，对其他的金融主体产生影响。所以，无论是在金融平稳发展时期，还是在金融危机时期，金融风险扩散都将是我们一直关注的问题。
Financeis the core of modern economy, as economic globalization and financialliberalization, security and stability of financial markets to become ourfocus. As long as there are financial activities,financial risks willinevitablely arise and develope. Risks in the financial market are not isolatedfrom one and another. Due to the fact that financial markets and financialorganizations are all highly and closely related as well as interactive witheach other, so when the risk hits, it will expand and diffuse if it gotaccumulated and not handled appropriately, and this will lead to thedeterioration the situation of other financial entities. . Therefore, no matterin financial stable period of development, or in times of financial crisis,Financial risk diffusion will always  be our concern.

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呵呵，我看翻译挺好的。

首句感觉有语法错误。

security and stability of financial markets to become ourfocus.
哥们，你这没动词啊

鉴于本人才疏学浅，只能斗胆提供两种改法：
1、Financeis is the core of modern economy. And the security and stability of financial markets has become our focus as the economic globalization and financialliberalization develop.
2.The security and stability of financial markets, which is the core of modern economy, has become our focus as the economic globalization and financialliberalization develop.

感觉楼主的翻译像是google直译的。