这句话写到简历上有问题吗？

konghui11 发表于 2012-4-12 10:31
你现在是几年级的？在哪里上学？

I have worked for tow years, and have wonderful achievements in what I have done.

frilin1001 发表于 2012-4-12 10:34
我看后觉得很不自在

Great thanks for your kindly advice.

heinrico 发表于 2012-4-12 10:47
I have worked for tow years, and have wonderful achievements in what I have done.

U are  the superman in the legend.Worship u!

konghui11 发表于 2012-4-12 10:51
U are  the superman in the legend.Worship u!

Sounds ironic, thank you for kindly advice anyway.

heinrico 发表于 2012-4-12 11:02
Sounds ironic, thank you for kindly advice anyway.

nah,i worship u sincerely.

太空了。。。

shiruyi1988 发表于 2012-4-12 11:07
太空了。。。

Thanks for your advice.

建议改成“我有熊的力量，豹的速度，鹰的敏锐，狼的耐心。。。”

clmtw 发表于 2012-4-12 11:51
建议改成“我有熊的力量，豹的速度，鹰的敏锐，狼的耐心。。。”

谢谢，呵呵。

自我评价这样写，一般的简历筛选人员不会通过