Is Trading with China Good for America? (大三原创)

在自由市场下和逐渐取消贸易壁垒的同时，两国之间实际上是互赢得，只是不平衡而已。

good try . go for it , just do it. best wishes to you!

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三思而立 发表于 2013-1-25 09:02
good try . go for it , just do it. best wishes to you!

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good job

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reduce_fat 发表于 2012-6-5 13:41
I am working on my master degree in AS now. Would you please add some comments on my article?

Thank you for your reply.

I am highly glad to offer comment on your writing. I'd also like to let you know that I just read you message today, on 2018/02/28,  instead of about 6 years ago, when you invited me to comment.

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Below is my comments.

First of all, I believe your writing is well started, since your writing subject is "Is Trading with China Good for America?", you explained why trading is needed for most countries and concluded that trading is important for almost every countries including China And America. Then you move on to quote from U.S trade representatives to show that significant volume of trading already existed between the two nations. To continue your analysis, you subsequently listed three reasons how U.S can take advantage of trading with China.

However, the later part of your writing can be improved since you were not expand it according to the reasons list in the beginning.

Your second paragraph has just focused on the U.S chips industry which can benefit from exporting more chips to China, I believe you should focused on the whole consuming market of China as the first why-reason mentioned in your first Paragraph.

The same as I point above, your third paragraph emphasized that the U.S could benefit by providing internet service to China. Nevertheless, the second reason your writing mentioned in the first paragraph is that China has heavily invested in the U.S, so I believe your third paragraph should be organized to elaborate on investment-concerned facts of China.

The second last paragraph of your writing went length to explain the huge amount of steel China had imported from U.S. I believe you should make your writing echo to your first paragraph by explaining why it is bad for America to "Buy American".

Your last paragraph is well done, it has summarized that there are multiple reasons why it is important to the two nations to conduct international trading. It do has mentioned the investment reason as a echo to one of the reason pre-listed in the first paragraph.

So my overall comment is that your writing is well reasoned with sufficient basis, but it could outclass by better organization.

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