跪求英语翻译！能否帮忙修改一下么？

1.我最近发现了一个导致我研究生成绩不理想的缺点，就是很多时候喜欢一蹴而就。其实，不论做什么事情都要一点一点的去接近目标，太急了反而不能成功。我正努力去改掉它。
2.管理类和经济类的学科本来就有相通处，而且我大学期间也涉及过经济学的知识，并且对经济学十分感兴趣，经济学是个逻辑性很强的学科，他在某些方面比管理学有体系，因为这个学科的历史比较久远。
3.我觉得多读书能提升人的气质，能让人在思考问题的时候思维比较活跃。
4.你会工作一辈子，但能读书的时光却比较短暂
5.贵校是个比较不错的学校，并且地处上海这个现代化的城市，机会比较多，能让人眼界开阔
6.大学四年的生活，教会我如何去思考。而且我学会了如何去珍惜能够获得的资源。在这期间，我学会了怎么和人沟通，怎么去改进自己。
1.Recently, I found the reason why I didn’t get a satisfactory result in my graduate entrance examination. It is due to my attitude towards learning. I am always too hasty to see the results . Now I am trying my best to change it.
2.Management and Economics, to some extent, have some connections, and during my university study, I also touched upon the knowledge of economics. And I am very interested in economics. From my perspective, economics is a highly logical subject, which in some ways more systematic than management, and economics has a longer history.
3.I think learning can improve people's temperament, and it can also make people think more actively.
4.You may work for life, but the time for learning is rather transient.
5.Your school is really a woderful choice for me. Since it is located in Shanghai, a modern city, there will be more opportunities for me, and it can also broaden my horizon.
6.The four-year campus life has taught me how to think. And I learned how to treasure the resources available. During this period, I have learned how to communicate with others, and how to improve myself.

1.recently，I found a negative factor resulting in my unsatisfying score of graduate admission examination. That is accomplishing my aim in one move. Frankly,when dealing with every task, we should reach our goal step by step and bear in mind the saying "More haste, less speed". And  now I am trying to get rid of my shortcoming.
2.The discipline of management and economics share lots of similarities.In my college days ,I also dabbled in economics and I feel much interest in the field of economics.Through the study ,I find that economics requires a strong logical sense and in some ways economics is more systematic than management as well as shares long history.
3.I think that extensive reading can upgrade one's temperament and makes us more active in the process of thinking.
4.You will work throughout your life, but your reading time is relatively limited.
5.University of shanghai for science and technology is a distinguished one and locate in shanghai--one of the most modernized metropolis where can provide me with numerous opportunities and broaden my horizon.
6.The 4 years college days witnessed my growth.I developed the capacity to think in the right way and grasp and cherish every accessible chances.last but not least,I have learned to communicate with others and improve myself.