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[财经英语角区] 20120604 Follow Me 389 Free Markets Require Increased Legal Immigration [推广有奖]

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zhifengzuo 发表于 2012-6-4 22:19:55
Actually at present those who immigrate to foreign country are of wealth or of skills. The businessman move abroad and they can start business by investing the capital, which can stimulate the economy or even creat job opportunity; Those skilled people can always make contributions to the society. All in all , immigration will bring a lot of income to the country.Of course, immigration may be unhelpful for recoverying local employment. There will be competition between local people and  immigrants. That's not a bad thing. This conflict can be handled properly. Legal immigration need to be increased due to that the country can benefit more than suffer.
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shenxiaoqiang 发表于 2012-6-4 22:26:18
What you do in this forum is terrific,I hope oneday I can reach your level, having a tight thinking and controling English smoothly .
Immigration leads to a flow of labor and capital.Talented immigration brings vitality to developed countries' economy. For developing countries , like China,  should create an environment to retain talents and attract talented immigration.
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I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: "We hold these truths to be self-evident that all men are created equal.

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happylife87 发表于 2012-6-4 23:23:36
reduce_fat 发表于 2012-6-4 14:24
I am studing in the U.S. now and is ready to sleep soon.
Then it's fine! lol~

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mu_lianzheng 发表于 2012-6-4 23:30:10
修改了几处,并且在原文把修改后的部分用红色字体标出,不过只代表个人观点,不一定正确.
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reduce_fat 发表于 2012-6-4 23:35:46
mu_lianzheng 发表于 2012-6-4 23:30
修改了几处,并且在原文把修改后的部分用红色字体标出,不过只代表个人观点,不一定正确.
Thanks for your modification. I used to write statements like what you did, but Americans told me that both ways are fine. You do not have to add a comma after an adverb when you start a new statement unless you want to emphasize something.
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mu_lianzheng 发表于 2012-6-4 23:41:01
reduce_fat 发表于 2012-6-4 23:35
Thanks for your modification. I used to write statements like what you did, but Americans told me  ...
Many thanks. I will enter the George Washington Graduate College on August 1st, however I still need to improve myself, you set a good example!
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reduce_fat 发表于 2012-6-4 23:46:12
mu_lianzheng 发表于 2012-6-4 23:41
Many thanks. I will enter the George Washington Graduate College on August 1st, however I still ne ...
That is a great college, which has a higher academic rank than my undergraduate college. Work hard and achieve your goal.
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sunpj031 发表于 2012-6-5 08:08:52
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樱树 发表于 2012-6-5 11:33:22
非常不错,严重支持

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shihaixin 发表于 2012-6-5 19:04:04
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