悬赏30论坛币 求修改英语翻译，非常着急，好心人帮帮忙

所以，无论是在金融平稳发展时期，还是在金融危机时期，金融风险扩散都将是我们一直关注的问题。
Therefore,no matter in financial stable period ofdevelopment,or in times of financial crisis, Financial risk diffusion willalways be our concern.

关键词：金融风险 扩散路径 扩散模型
key words: financial risk   diffusion model   diffusion path

金融风险扩散理论及其应用研究
DiffusionTheory of Financial Risks and its Applied Research

This thesis purpose to study the financial risks.The first part of the paper introduces the significance, research status, content and method worldwide; The second part describes the basic theory of financial risks diffusion; The third part is about the diffusion path and model; The fourth part is the empirical research of financial risks diffusion; The last part is the summary and the prospects for future research.

后面的好像还可以，意思明白即可。

好想法 可以另寻专业途径修改嘛

改这个 跟自己翻译差不多啊！

我一句一句帮你改吧。
第一句完全是个病句，一个句子没有连词却有两个谓语（is和become），而as引导的状语从句却又缺了个谓语。楼主英语基本功得好好改进下，剩下的我抽空一句一句给你慢慢改吧。（小弟也就只能上班闲的时候给帮忙哦，万物见怪！）
Financeis the core of modern economy, as economic globalization and financialliberalization, security and stability of financial markets become our focus.

改：
Finance is now the core of modern economy and as economic gloalization and financial liberalization developed, the issue of security and stability has become the financial market's highlight.

Aslong as there are financial activities,financial risks will inevitablely ariseand develope. Risks in the financial market are not isolated from one andanother.Due to the fact that financial markets and financial organizations areall highly and closely related as well as interactive with each other,so whenthe risk hits,it will expand and diffuse if it got accumulated and not handledappropriately,and this will lead to the deterioration the situation of otherfinancial entities.

这堆话显得又啰嗦又杂乱无章。。

改：
Where there are financial activities, there are financial risks. The risks, which are not independent to each other for the highly correlation among financial institutions and financial market, would hit the market, expand and diffuse if not handled appropriately,  leading to a bubble and the deterioration of financial subjects.