求 翻译 中译英

内容：世界城市是国际城市的高端形态，聚集全球资源，影响全球发展。纽约、伦敦、东京等当今世界城市的发展经验，对北京建设中国特色世界城市提供了有益借鉴。北京现在也遇到诸如人口膨胀，交通拥堵等大城市问题，而“环首都经济圈”概念提出了解决大城市问题和振兴区域经济的的方法。本文全面分析了“环首都经济圈”对北京世界城市建设的推动作用，强调“环首都经济圈”对北京建设世界城市的重要意义，并总结概括大伦敦、大东京地区的建设经验，为“环首都经济圈”规划建设提供借鉴。
中译英 ，最好别是软件翻译的  求高人！专业点的，在线等了

说实话，我不是内行，但觉得你这个摘要还得好好改改才行。下面是我的翻译，你看着办吧：

Cosmopolis, the high-end form of international cities, draws together global resources and exerts global influence.  The development history of New York, London and Tokyo lends a good example to Beijing in its construction of a Chinese characteristic cosmopolis.

Beijing is now facing typical cosmopolitan issues such as population growth and traffic congestion.  As a solution the concept of "circum-capital economic circle" has been proposed to revitalize the regional economy.

In this article we have provided comprehensive analysis of the positive effect that the "circum-capital economic circle" has on the cosmopolitan construction of Beijing.  After drawing on past development experience from the Greater London and Greater Tokyo Areas, we put an emphasis on......

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这摘要我也头疼，不怎么会写。没写过几次，望指点一二 ，翻译很好 谢谢