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现在距离2016考研还有40天左右的时间，同学们的复习已经进入白热化的状态。在2016考研英语方面，如何备战作文，争取在有限的时间内多拿分成为考生最为关心的问题。本文就来谈一下，如何在2016考研英语作文中打造高级句式，写出一篇令人赏心悦目的地道英语文章。
一、句型
1、多用连词，尽可能把简短的小句通过逻辑连接词的手段连成长句子，这样更有逻辑性。例如：
One person says:"All has gone". The other person says:"There is still a little water."建议改为：
One person says, "All has gone" while/whereas the other person says, "There is still a little water."
Optimistic attitude plays a role in our daily life.When we encounter setbacks,optimistic can make us have confidence to cope with them.建议改为：
Optimistic attitude plays a role in our daily life，because optimistic can make us have confidence to cope with setbacks when we encounter them.
2、多用从句和非谓语动词形式,这样句式更为高级。 例如：
Second,we can try to ride bicycles or take buses to go to school or work.Thus can reduce harmful gas.建议改为：
Second,we can try to ride bicycles or take buses to go to school or work，which can reduce harmful gas.或者
Second, in order to reduce harmful gas, we can try to ride bicycles or take buses to go to school or work.再如：
In the middle stand two individuals. When they see the bottle of water fall down, they react differently. One feels gloomy and the other feels optimistic.建议改为：
In the middle stand two individuals, who react differently towards the same phenomenon, with one feeling gloomy while the other optimistic.
二、如何展开论证
1、具体展开解释某个词的内涵。对前一句话中的某一个短语或是整句话的含义进行展开论证。
Some students are pursuing too high a goal when seeking for jobs. They care about various factors such as salaries, working conditions and so forth, which narrows their choice.第二句是对 too high a goal的展开论证。
Optimistic attitude，as a positive attitude, not only means recognizing the existence of problems, but also takes active mentality to solve problems.Once the difficult issue pops out unexpectedly, our positive mindset enables us to notice its good points and think of ways to avoid or improve its bad consequence. 第二句是对takes active mentality 的展开论证。
It is universally acknowledged that life is by no means perfect and whether we feel optimistic or not depends on what attitudes we take. When confronted with an adverse situation, some youths feel in low spirits and fall into depression. Others, on the contrary, look at the positive side of the situation and remain cheerful. 第二句话是对第一句话的展开说明。
2. 因果法
Optimistic attitude plays a significant role in our daily life，because optimistic can make us have confidence to cope with the setbacks when we encounter them.
3.反证法
Without the merit of optimism, we are more likely to experience more pains and end up with failure.
4.例证法
Numerous examples can be given, but this/these will suffice.
最后，给大家一个小建议，平时我们可以训练自己多用连词，多开拓自己的写作思维，积累语料，这样在2016考研英语写作时就可以轻松应对了。
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