不要只用机器翻译。
记得多加一些关联词,让你的文章有逻辑推进的感觉。
比如:
表示递进的:then, subsequently, in addition, besides, what is more, moreover, furthermore, in order to...further, 等等;
表示转折和让步关系的:but, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, on the contrary, on the other hand, in contrast, instead of, even so, though, although, despite, regardless of, in spite of, as opposed to等等;
表示层次关系的:firstly, first of all, to begin with, secondly...finally, last but not least, afterwards,simultaneously, at the meantime, meanwhile, eventually等等;
表示因果关系的:because, because of this, since, for this reason, thanks to, due to, owing to, seeing that, on account of, therefore,as a result, hence, consequently, accordingly等等;
表示归纳总结的:in conclusion, in summary, in sum, in short,overall,等等;
表示条件关系的:unless, otherwise, only if, if only, suppose that, as soon as, in case that, providing that, given that等等