帮忙审核一下几句话的翻译质量

Compared to pure online stores, O2O offers a richer experience, making it easier to trigger online word-of-mouth communication which become the main difference between O2O and pure online consumption. According to study results, the key to improve customer satisfaction in restaurant industry is to improve product quality and service level. Online discounts and other promotional activities, as a traditional means of gaining competitive advantage, although many scholars believe that the effectiveness is reduced, it is  indispensable means to attract traffic, trigger word of mouth.

我来修改一下  这是我的拙见   Be Compared  to the way of  sheer online stores,The main difference between O2O and pureonline consumption is that O2O offers richer experience and it is easier and more faster than online public praise. According to the research results, the key of thecatering industry to boost customer satisfaction is to improve the productquality and service level. Although the effectiveness of such promotionalactivities as online discounts, etc., as traditional means of gainingcompetitive advantages, are considered by many scholars to be lowering, they are in dispensable means online to attract traffic and trigger public praise.   楼主翻译的很不错，英语肯定很扎实吧

The translation that you have done seems to be very good.

Well done!!!!!!!!

carrierchan 发表于 2017-8-9 09:37
挺不错的~

看来大家对我的英文并不感冒，除了您！谢谢您的欣赏！