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英语一作文写作要求及思路
考研英语根据所报专业不同分为英语一和英语二，无论是英一还是英二，作文都是重点分值分布所在，英一和英二的作文都包括大作文与小作文两个部分。区别在于，英一大作文满分20分，英二大作文满分为15分。可见，作文对于考研英语拿分的重要性是不容忽视的。今天我们就来学习英一大作文的写作要求以及写作思路。大作文固定要求字数在160-200之间，也就是说，平时在练习写作时，要注意字数的控制。不可写少，也不可写超。同时，也要注意字迹工整，切忌乱涂乱抹。具体写作流程：
一，写作段落框架：
采取三段式。第一段内容：简要描述图片，字数在40词左右，大约2~3句话。第二段内容：首句，点明图片寓意；第二句开始分析图片内容产生的原因及带来的影响。字数在80-100之间，大约6~7句话。第三段内容：提出建议对策并表明态度决心。字数在40词左右，大约3~4句话。
二，审题立意：
1，描标题；2，描图画元素。近十年，考研英一大作文主要分为两大类：社会现象和品质哲理。其中，社会现象又包括：文化现象、环境保护、运动健康、伦理道德。
三，写作思路：正向，负向，品质哲理
（1）正向：
1，第一段，描图；
2，第二段，点明图片寓意：提出现象+分析现象产生的原因。具体内容：第一句，图中反映了一个好的现象：大多数的人越来越重视......。这是一个社会所必需的。第二句~第五句，好的事物带来的好处或积极意义。（功能句型：①What the picture conveys is a desirable phenomenon that most people now pay increasingly more attention to 主题词, which is essential to a society.② It cannot be denied that 主题词 plays a central role in various aspects.③ First,... （For example）Second,....For instance，...）
3，总结评论+态度决心
（2）负向：
1，第一段，描图；
2，第二段，点名图片寓意：提出现象→分析现象产生的原因。具体内容：1.图中反映了一个坏的现象：有一些人忽视了...，而...是一个社会所必需的。2.为什么会产生这样的现象呢？3.可以从两个方面解释。4.第一，在所有人都有意识自觉地...之前，仍然有很长的路要走。比如，我们会听到/看到...。5.第二，相关制度并不完善。比如...。（功能句：①What the picture conveys is an undesirable phenomenon that some people now ignore 主题词， which is essential to a society. ②Why does this arise? ③Two factors can account for it.④原因一First, there is still a long way to go before all the people are aware of 主题词（sth./doing sth.). 举例For example, we often hear such news that... And it is not uncommon to see such a scene that... ⑤Second, relevant systems are not sound enough. 原因二For instance, in some places, the restraining regulations are in absence, and if any, they are lack of enforcement.）
3，总结评论+建议措施+态度决心
（3）品质哲理
1，第一段，描图；
2，第二段，点明图片寓意：提出品质→分析品质的意义影响
3，第三段，建议对策+态度决心
具体范文（红色字体根据图片内容可替换）：
一，文化教育（正向类）
As is shown in the picture，+简要描述图片内容（注意文字标题）。
The emergence of such multiple options for young university graduates can be attributed to the following contributing factors. First, with the change of social structure and the development of the economy（经济）, as many talents with a higher degree as labors are needed. Therefore, a mounting number of undergraduates sign for the entrance examination for graduate students to enhance themselves. Besides, by offering diverse favorable policies, our country is encouraging sb. to do sth.
Based on the above discussions, as a young man leaving university, we are supported by our society as well as our family. Thus, we have no reason not to strive for a promising future.It is endeavor and persistence that we only need now.
二，文化教育（负方向）
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon,图. But he seems confused, not knowing which course to choose.
The picture reveals an undesirable phenomenon among the young, especially college students, that has aroused much concern: Though having various options, they are often at lost. Why does this arise? Two factors can account for it.First, most of the current university students are the only child, and are overprotected by family members, having no specific goals or plans for their future. Therefore, they are not independent enough to analyze advantages and disadvantages of a course. Second, some young adults lack full evaluation of themselves and cannot review themselves reasonably, such as their strengths and weaknesses, or interests, only to make a choice blindly.
Based on the above analyses, we, as young adults, are expected to make an option on our own to choose a more suitable course.
三，环境保护类
Portrayed in the cartoon are four garbage cans representing different varieties of waste, +图片描述。
Currently, news has it that some major cities in China are setting about pushing “waste sorting”, with the purpose of both reforming the traditional waste treatment and improving this fragile environment we live in. What an encouraging change！Compared with the traditional way of collecting waste, the brand-new approach has brought with the variety of benefits. First and foremost, wastes are sent to different factories according to their classification rather than landfills, where they would be simply burnt and buried.What’s more, waste classification not only cuts the spending on treating pollution, but generates some interests as well. All in all, garbage classification is related to the people’s living environment and economical use of resources. It is also an important embodiment of the level of civic-mindedness.
From my perspective, waste classification should be further promoted as an effective means of environment protection. Meanwhile, it would be rather beneficial if we could influence as many people around us as possible.
四，运动健康类
Depicted in the picture is a man riding a shared bike. Just as the title below the picture reads, the picture reflects the great benefits and many conveniences brought by shared bikes.
With the rapid development of economy, the bike-sharing booms across the country. The springing up of shared bikes cater to many needs in our society. First, we can ride and park a shared bike at the gate of subway stations or at the side of roads. It saves much time for those who otherwise have to walk to companies. Second, shared bikes are environmentally friendly and can relieve road pressures, reducing traffic jams. Though, they cause some problems as well, for example, occupying too much public areas, being parked casually. So, more supervision and management should be made by companies and departments concerned.
Considering all the points discussed above, we can easily recognize the significance of the shared bikes in terms of people's daily life. Bike sharing is an innovative service. And more shared bikes should be launched into the market.
四，伦理道德类
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon,+图片内容。This inspiring and thought-provoking scene is reminding us of the fact that+完整的句子。
The implied meaning of the photo is worth discussing. First and foremost, with the help of the internet and modern means of transportation, we have already been in a globalized world. Therefore, holding a global perspective that respective that respects cultural diversity is a necessity. What's more, as a global citizen, we should endeavor to create a favorable environment to promote（/enhance/improve/develop） the development of the whole world. Accordingly, the slogan of “the Same Earth, the Same World” expresses both our dedication to globalization and our wish for joint efforts to protect our only home---the earth.
I am convinced that only if people all over the worlds cooperate with each other, can the world provide an opportunity for people from different countries to appreciate the history, culture, and future of this time-honored country. Additionally, it is a gesture of friendship that the community of nations is building for a harmonious and healthy world.
五，品质哲理类
The implication echoed by this cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in our daily life:哲理内容+图片元素。
The success of a man may be directly related to a wise choice made by himself, because a choice decides the direction of his way. Nevertheless, only when we adhere to the way we choose will success be realized step by step. Persistence, combined with optimism and confidence, functions as an indispensable driving force to keep up our spirit and to assist us to fulfill our study and work. For example, Ma Yun, a successful businessman always views persistence in his initial choice as one of the keys to his success. However, some people, pacing up and down, are not industrious enough and try to find a short-cut to success. In fact, only those who are persistent and brave enough to encounter obstacles of all sorts on their ways are most likely to reach the summit of success.
In a word, it is a wise choice in a favorable social environment, combined with efforts, persistence and confidence, that enables young people to enjoy a promising future.
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