Is Trading with China Good for America? (大三原创)

nkqgly04 发表于 2012-6-5 13:52
三年级的作文，听好了

I wrote this paper before I became a junior in college. Thanks for your comment anyhow.

一朵花 发表于 2012-6-5 14:13

哈哈，你和最后一只花是不是同一个人啊？名字都很类似，头像里也都有花。

reduce_fat 发表于 2012-6-5 14:19
哈哈，你和最后一只花是不是同一个人啊？名字都很类似，头像里也都有花。

呵呵呵。。。你是柯南。。。

支持一下

It is great to write the article as a senior student only relies on reading  some articles on web~

国际贸易方面的专家进来 计算下，到底两国谁受益最大，受益多少

Your paper title is ‘Is Trading with China Good for America?’,your answer is ‘yes’. I believe, almost everyone in the world knows the answer, even the U.S. politician who encourages to set up tariff of Chinese good. You are proving a generally acknowledged truth, your proof is not convincing. What’s more, there isn’t any theory in your article.Although I take the viewpoint that theory isn’t essential part of a article. For our graduates, we can’t use the theory smoothly, what we need to do is to analyse the problem using economic thought from a overall perspective. Your paper can be targeted as a trade report,which include lots of data and cases.What you write is excellent for same students in China, including myself. Chinese Colleges should build up an environment to write something about their major and give students enough incentives to write.

Following is my opinion, my major is International Economics and Trade.

1.    At the head of your article ,you said’In the~~~~~~~by themselves”,the reason of international trade is complicated,what you said is only a very small part. The reason or the motivation of international is great issue of the study. As time goes by, the reason or motivation is changing.

2.    You have to notice that the U.S. has restriction of high-tech products exporting to China,when you analyse the benefits of export,you should be on the basis of political feasibility. If you can list the promising  products that the two country will trade, it will become more convincing. Certainly, you have to know the practical trade.

3.    There’s on doubt that China’s market is enomous, but there is huge barrier for foreign corporation to enter the market. Grabing the market need cost very much,exiting a huge transaction cost.

4.    It’s my first time to hear about ‘ Buy American’, which is novel to me. For most Chinese, they have little definition of it. ‘Buy American’ is only a potential trend.

This issue is too big ,to be honest ,I don’t have enough knowledge to prove ‘Trading with China Good for America’.

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