Is Trading with China Good for America? (大三原创)

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sudaludan 发表于 2012-6-6 10:03
You  are  very  good!

Thanks for your support, but please leave a more constructive comment in the future. By the way, your picture is so funny. The baby is smoking.

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xinxin880603 发表于 2012-6-6 09:20
Maybe you can add a model in your paper.That can make your paper more persuasion.

I created a model and did analysis in a research project during my senior year, but I would not share it here since it's my original research paper for a graduate writing sample. The paper had nearly 5000 English words.

I've read your article,which is really perfectly written. Your choice of words and sentences is wonderful and you know how to develop what you want to convey to your readers in a good logic, perhaps your standpoints are not novel ,but they are out of your digesting. of course , it is unavoidable for anyone to make mistakes in writing in another language (not mother tongue). however, your smooth and fluent expression hightlight your capability of completing thesis in english and mask the weakness. Congradulations! May you have a bright future, errr,it is promising! Go!

fortunately enough to have read your article.

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at first glimpse of your title, I am a bit confused by what you want to write for your article.After spend some seconds in carefully reading your title, I realize what you want to write. From my perspective, the biggest trading volumn between the 2 countries lie in the labour intensive industries which goods are exported from china and high tech industries,imported into china. For labour intensive industries, trading with china can gain great profit and reduce many cost as for most labour intensive industries.for example, the apparel industries, the most profit portion such as designing a cloth  lies in USA and chinese worker only to produce a cloth with high cost and little margin.I think you can analysis from this perspective. And you mentioned metallurgy industries, such as steel industries,but i am quite unacquaintance with this industries,the only knowledge is that such industries are heavy polluted and have surplus in production capacity. so i can not give you any comment. For this article, the basic theory is somewhat called 国际分工,sorry for my poor memory,and you can describe the theory and set some examples you mentioned in the thesis.

meinfrer 发表于 2012-6-7 22:24
at first glimpse of your title, I am a bit confused by what you want to write for your article.After ...

First, I want to thank you for your constructive comment.

In addition, China was a labor intensive country and the U.S. was a capital intensive country. As technology improved, China labors have become much more productive and a little more expensive than what they were a couple of decades ago. In contrast to the U.S. labors, China labors are still cheaper, so we can apply the theory of comparative advantage between China and the U.S. The U.S. companies could offer technlogy and capitals to train China labors to work for them with lower costs than train American workers.

Moreover, I don't know much about th theory of International division of labor. Although China and the U.S. have different cultures, languages, and beliefs, they should figure out an way to better communicate with each other and make mutual profits.