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Hello everyone. I only have one month to prepare for my IELTS test. And I find it's hard to insist on the reviewing. So I figure out that if I could use this plat to practise my writing skills. If it's not permited here pls accept my appologize.
All of my writing topics are from the IELTS tests. Maybe it will be helpfull if you are preparing for your IELTS test too. I am appreciate any communication about this test preparing.
It's my pleasure if anybody would revise my writing and THANK YOU~
IELTS 4 - Test 1 - Writing Task 1:
The table shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. The total poverty proportion of all households are 11%.
The poverty proportion of couple with children (12% ) is higer than the couple whitout children (7%). And the same phenomenon shows that the poverty proportion of sole parent (21%) is higer than the single without children (19%). It's clear that the proportion of the people with children are more likely poor than the people without chidren.
The comparison above also represent that couple people are less poor than the single people. The same phenomenon shows in the aged people. Aged couple are less poor than the single aged person.
From the table, we can see that bring up children will cost more which maybe the reson of the poor of many family. And we also can see that couple are more likely to rid of the poverty than the single.
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