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wangkai0130 发表于 2009-8-12 16:59:26 |AI写论文

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luomanxj 发表于 2009-8-14 18:51:21
题目:Some industrilised country have serious enviromental problem .The damage to the enviromental is inevatable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, it is universally acknowledged that the majority of the country ,especially industrialised ones, are irretated with the enviromental promblems. To the eyes of some people, it hardly have relationship with the industrialised evolvement. However, from my point of view, improving standard of living, among other things,inevitably contribute to deterioration of the enviroment

The economic booming is responsible for taking up the natrual resources causing the enviromental crisis. In order to maitain produce goods human is in need of original metarial such as wood crude even utilizing animals. Additionally ,a great number of land serve as houses for dwellers, plants for manufacturers or entertainment facilities which are essential access to better individuals living
standard . By contrast , in some undeveloped countries poor as they are ,people can stay in harmony with nature and the landscaps are magnificant without serious pollution

Some people claim that government will take measures to protect the enviroment while developing
the economy. Howeve, they are oversimplifying the situation. Actually, in some developing areas, where are often regarded as a better living places, individuals have difficilty in avoiding of making pollutants. For instance numerous cars should account for air pollution without any doubts. rubbish thrown by people may lead to chemical poisons, Air conditioners result in high level of greenhouse gas. There for human as a major factor of causing enviromental prombles should not be neglected when discussing about natural issues


Taking into account of the factors above, we may safely draw the conclusion that although we have taken some acts to conserve the environment ,it is still the prime reason to engender the bad situation

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jiangzisuok 发表于 2009-8-21 11:23:25
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