大家感觉中文的句式对吗?
保护关税制度是制造工厂主、剥夺独立劳动者、使国民的生产资料和生活资料变成资本、强制缩短从旧生产方式向现代生产方式的过渡的一种人为手段.
The system of protection was an artificial means of manufacturing manufacturers, of expropriating independent labourers, of capitalising the national means of production and subsistence, of forcibly abbreviating the transition from the medieval to the modern mode of production.