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Gender imbalance has already become a serious social problem in China. Meanwhile, a different mismatch of single men and women of marriageable age is present in large and mid-sized cities. Urban “leftover women” is categorized into “active” and “passive” types. Factors resulting in the two types are different, including level of education, concept of love and marriage, age, types of occupation and so on. To solve the urban “leftover women” phenomenon, both government and society should take countermeasures and single person is encouraged to change standards for selecting a mate.
这是一篇简短的abstract。开篇明义，点明这是一个社会问题，自然显得重要。Meanwhile 起的是承接的作用， gender imbalance 是后面mismatch的原因，a different mismatch …. Is present in … 要注意different是本篇要feature的角度， urban leftover women is categorized into …types. 然后讲了这两类leftover women在哪些方面不同。 后面是从ZF社会以及个人角度入手所提的建议，to solve …. Phenomenon, both government and society should take countermeasures and single person is …
总的来说，大家可以看出这篇abtract写得很一般，尤其是我们以前post的文章相比，特别是后半部分，我觉得有些词应该是用错了，例如，solve … phenonmenon 的搭配，single person 的说法。 本来不想post出来了，不过已经两天没放东西了，勉强放出来，也供大家做对比学习。
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