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有时候动词名词化的确是必须或无法避免的，但目前我们是过度使用了。下面我们列出常见的应修正名词化的情况：

• Meaningless verb + nominalization: Delete the meaningless one and convert the nominalization into the main verb
  • Joe will conduct research on the impact of the recent drought on local wildlife. → Joe will research the recent drought’s impact on local wildlife.
  • The board will make a decision next week about whether to accept you next week. → The board will decide next week whether to accept you.
    
• When the nominalization is the subject of a passive voice structure: Identify the true subject, and convert nominalization to a verb for that subject.
  • The approval of the plan was given by the committee yesterday. → The committee approved the plan yesterday.
    
• Back-to-back nominalizations: Make the first a verb, and keep the second or change the second to a question-word phrase.
  • Their interpretation of the implementation of the institute’s program was insightful. → They insightfully interpreted how the institute implemented its program.
  • First was their introduction of their analysis of dreams by the trauma patients. → First, they introduced how they analyzed the trauma patients’ dreams.
    
• When a nominalization in the subject is connected to a nominalization in the predicate [This is a hard one!]: Change each nominalization to a verb. Then consider the logical connection between the two parts and add the appropriate connectors (because, when, if, although, even though, despite, etc.).
  • Her understanding of the situation was evidenced by the quitting of her job. → She understood the situation … she quit her job → When she quit her job, she showed she understood the situation.
    
  
  

现在一起来练习今天所学习到的修改技巧！

Beginner

• We made an agreement not to buy the house.
• They reached the conclusion that we should run a new cohort study.
• Our review of the test results will begin tomorrow.
  

Intermediate

• The discovery of a new planet by the Frankfurt Observatory excited the scientific community.
• The failure of the staff to organize the festival properly was a disappointment to us.
• The undertaking of building the new company was complicated by their lack of experience.
  

解答看此 --> 转自Wordvice博客

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